Monday, March 25, 2019

Watermelon Poem

Watermelon
Round green shape with a zebra pattern,
Taste’s cold,sweet and juicy,
Smells like fresh green grass walking over the watermelon,
Feels smooth on the outside and soft on the inside,
Crunchy as I bite the watermelon,
Juiciness filling my mouth.

By Larz
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousMarch 25, 2019 at 10:04 AM

    Hi Larz, I like how your have extended your descriptive language to make it more interesting for the reader,
    I like how you included the scences
    maybe next time at a more intresting title

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