*Environmental Poetry*
Greyish yellow sand quickly blows away,
White boats safely going to the sea,
Brobdingnagian islands wait patiently for people
to walk on their paths,
White ocean foam slowly coming to the shore,
Step hills stand strongly,
The long wharf sitting quietly on the wet sea ground,
The green grass sways softly,
The clear blue ocean moves calmly,
Bumpy rocks hardly fall to the ground,
Trees oscillating happily,
What our classroom did was to get a picture then make a table with nouns adjectives verbs and adverbs and then we used the words to make a poem.
What I found challenging was finding verbs.
What I found challenging was finding verbs.
What I enjoyed was describing the nouns with
adjectives verbs and adverbs.
Kia ora Larz,
ReplyDeleteI read with interest the way you reflected on your learning and pinpointed the challenges. I could identify verbs in your writing like blow, wait, stand, sway and oscillating. Ka pai!
Is the photo you used any place special to you? It looks like a serene place to visit for a vacation.
Keep up the descriptive wriitng.
Mā te wā
Mrs Torrie