*Environmental Writing*
Fearless Mountains standing strongly,
The choppy river flowing quickly,
Bumpy bark covered trees swaying calmly,
Wavy grass moving slowly,
Uneven rocks slowly roll down the mountain side dangerously,
Fluffy clouds gliding happily,
What my class did was describe a picture with adjectives,verbs and adverbs and then make a table and put the words in the table and then make a poem out of those words.
What I enjoyed was describing the nouns.
What I found challenging was describing every noun with adjectives,verbs and adverbs.
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ReplyDelete今日は, Larz.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Emerald, and i'm a fellow classmate of yours in Room 2.
I'm fond of the fact that you have used bold descriptive language, and your poem makes sense. I'm also keen on the fact that you have added a thoughtful explanation on what our classes assignment was.
I learnt that you can use your imagination to think up a scenario whilst looking at a motionless picture.
Next time, I think you could end your final sentence in the poem with a full stop, as the poem has finished.
Did you enjoy the process of making these poems?
決別.
ーEmerald, Room 2, 06/08/2019.
Hi Larz
ReplyDeleteMy name is Luke, I like how you said what you were doing. You have some great adverbs. I did a poem to. :-)